This was entered into the competition recently, about my home town. I realise the last bit sounds a bit biased! Every city's people are mighty and p...

Lovely. The hellish beginning grabs the reader instantly. Especially love 'breathe when you see the see the stars', then the last bit: '...greet the n...

@sean-h Thank you Sean. My character is mentally unstable, that's why she considered the thing on offer. Yes, very unbelievable though 🙂

EXIT‘Buy a new life for £300,00! Be reborn! You’ll be reversed to the age of 3 months and adopted by loving parents. But beware, we can’t say who or g...

@alison - love this. Character with attitude.